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05 December 2005 @ 07:37 pm
Review Wu  
The Fic: Champions
The Author: Just Wolf
Rating: R (PoV: M)
Fandom: Harry Potter
In a Nut Shell: "After Cedric talks to Harry at the Yule Ball, Harry begins to think he might be more than just a Pretty Boy. Exploring the possibilities of a relationship between them during GoF."
Stand-out Pairings: Harry/Cedric
Grammar/Spelling: 9/10 The writing style doesn't get in the way of the fic at all.
Originality and Creativity: 9.5/10 I really like "what if" fics. So for so good, but it's a mixed bag as to how it ends.
Plot and Characterization: 10/10 Cedric gets some much deserved depth, and Harry is kept his capslock emo self. There's plenty of conflict in here, and eventually the authoress will have to address a little something called canon...
Status: WIP at seven chapters, 17198 words
Spoonage: I'm not a fan of prat!Ron, but I don't mind it much here. Don't expect too much from the "smutty" scenes.
Property of Vicioussemchance on December 6th, 2005 01:06 am (UTC)
The number you're looking for is "wu." And Cedric is way too good for Harry. And I'll probably read this anyway.
Nefyr: f/Llama Murrnefyr on December 6th, 2005 01:08 am (UTC)
Oooh, could you pretty pwease list the numbers from like, one to twenty? That should hold me over...
Property of Vicioussemchance on December 6th, 2005 02:01 am (UTC)
Well, one to ten is:
Yi, Er, San, Si, Wu, Liu, Qi, Ba, Jiu, Shi
And eleven to twenty is:
Shi Yi, Shi Er, Shi San, Shi Si, Shi Wu, Shi Liu, Shi Qi, Shi Ba, Shi Jiu, Er Shi

Do you see the pattern? O_o
Nefyr: f/Grinch The Thought Processnefyr on December 6th, 2005 04:31 am (UTC)
I'd have never guessed it if you hadn't alerted me to its presence.